Post by Hikari on Nov 15, 2010 20:42:55 GMT -5
Alright! Now that you know the basic character requirements, etc. Let's make a couple examples so you know what to look out for. First off is an application that will NOT be accepted until it is modified to approval.
Name: Samantha White
Race: Mutated Human
Age:5
Height: 6'7"
Weight: 1000lbs
Physical Description:
Sammy is leik soooo tall becuz liek she's like all deformed and shit and she's leik SUPER huge. She's liek a super big baby lol! Oh and she has liek blue eyes and blonde hair and is like super cute!
Possessions:Sammy owns a mansion
Profession: She's a baby tee-hee!
Abilities/Traits: She can stomp on people becuz she's huge, and give them puppy eyes and get whatever she wants and can sing super cute and ppl love her
Weaknesses: she's a baby so she super stupid
Background: She was born, then the chem. lab thingy esploded and she grew big and killed her mommy and daddy
Role Play Sample: Sammy picked up her baba and sucked it dry becuz it was nummy. Then she sat down and Squished her house.
Okay! So! You get the idea! More or less - keep it realistic to a degree. I'm not saying you can't have a seriously huge baby toddling around, however, if said huge baby can shoot lazers from its eyes... we might just have an issue here.
ALSO! Please please PLEASE! USE PROPER GRAMMAR! Granted not everyone is great with spelling and grammar - I certainly am not - but I will not accept or tolerate terrible spelling or grammar. MSN abbreviations are not acceptable. This is an advanced site people - MSN is not exactly advanced.
Now that I'm done my rant, on to a more acceptable character sheet:
Name: Samantha White
Race: Deformed Human
Age: 5
Height: 7'8"
Weight: 500 lbs
Physical Description:
Sam is simply the cutest baby you'll likely ever see - and the biggest! Standing at 7'8", she is the tallest 5-year-old girl you will ever play house with! But don't worry! She's just very tall... and very strong. Her childish build hides her monstrous strength and temper. Big blue eyes fool you into thinking she's sweet and innocent, her soft blond curls add to this appearance.
Possessions:
Being only 5 doesn't really own anything besides some toys and a handful of dresses.
Profession: ...she's 5, she's a little young for a job, don't you think?
Abilities/Traits:
Super Strength: This comes with her size! More or less what has happened is genetic mutation has caused little Sammy to become big Sammy. So while normal people are close to her size, they're fairly easy to pick up for her - kinda like a teddy bear idea.
Weaknesses:
Age: Sam is only 5 - she's not exactly the most educated person in the world, nor the most understanding. Ever since she 'grew up' she's believed she's an adult. As such she acts like she thinks one should. This generally includes eating what she wants when she wants, staying up late, yelling at her parents because they're not the boss of her no more, etc.
Background:
Born to body builder Jack White and marathon runner Aries White, Sam was a perfectly normal baby and remained so for a good 5 years. Then the explosion occurred and Sam went through a growth spurt that rivaled all. She went from being the normal 2'2" or so to 7'8" in about a week. Needless to say, Sam's been quite the handful ever since.
Role Play Sample: Sam trundled around her living room floor, looking for something good to eat. Spotting a bag of cookies in the cupboard, Sam squealed in delight and quickly made her way to the delicious treat.
So - same character, same idea, just more acceptable. Please keep in mind that if you're making a character that's, say, 5 years old as compared to someone who's 30 that there will be personality and action differences. I highly doubt you'll see a 30-year old Sam squealing in delight and running for a bag of cookies unless she has a mental handicap.
Also - I kept this form fairly short - I expect something a tad bit longer. I can understand if you have a semi-normal toddler who's just there for the purpose of having a trouble-causing character.
Keep in mind - we're more inclined to accept horribly disfigured mutants than sexed up mutants. This is NOT x-men guys, I don't want to see people trying to mix animal genes with humans and getting super sexy furries or hot anime women with animal ears and tails. You have been warned.
Name: Samantha White
Race: Mutated Human
Age:5
Height: 6'7"
Weight: 1000lbs
Physical Description:
Sammy is leik soooo tall becuz liek she's like all deformed and shit and she's leik SUPER huge. She's liek a super big baby lol! Oh and she has liek blue eyes and blonde hair and is like super cute!
Possessions:Sammy owns a mansion
Profession: She's a baby tee-hee!
Abilities/Traits: She can stomp on people becuz she's huge, and give them puppy eyes and get whatever she wants and can sing super cute and ppl love her
Weaknesses: she's a baby so she super stupid
Background: She was born, then the chem. lab thingy esploded and she grew big and killed her mommy and daddy
Role Play Sample: Sammy picked up her baba and sucked it dry becuz it was nummy. Then she sat down and Squished her house.
Okay! So! You get the idea! More or less - keep it realistic to a degree. I'm not saying you can't have a seriously huge baby toddling around, however, if said huge baby can shoot lazers from its eyes... we might just have an issue here.
ALSO! Please please PLEASE! USE PROPER GRAMMAR! Granted not everyone is great with spelling and grammar - I certainly am not - but I will not accept or tolerate terrible spelling or grammar. MSN abbreviations are not acceptable. This is an advanced site people - MSN is not exactly advanced.
Now that I'm done my rant, on to a more acceptable character sheet:
Name: Samantha White
Race: Deformed Human
Age: 5
Height: 7'8"
Weight: 500 lbs
Physical Description:
Sam is simply the cutest baby you'll likely ever see - and the biggest! Standing at 7'8", she is the tallest 5-year-old girl you will ever play house with! But don't worry! She's just very tall... and very strong. Her childish build hides her monstrous strength and temper. Big blue eyes fool you into thinking she's sweet and innocent, her soft blond curls add to this appearance.
Possessions:
Being only 5 doesn't really own anything besides some toys and a handful of dresses.
Profession: ...she's 5, she's a little young for a job, don't you think?
Abilities/Traits:
Super Strength: This comes with her size! More or less what has happened is genetic mutation has caused little Sammy to become big Sammy. So while normal people are close to her size, they're fairly easy to pick up for her - kinda like a teddy bear idea.
Weaknesses:
Age: Sam is only 5 - she's not exactly the most educated person in the world, nor the most understanding. Ever since she 'grew up' she's believed she's an adult. As such she acts like she thinks one should. This generally includes eating what she wants when she wants, staying up late, yelling at her parents because they're not the boss of her no more, etc.
Background:
Born to body builder Jack White and marathon runner Aries White, Sam was a perfectly normal baby and remained so for a good 5 years. Then the explosion occurred and Sam went through a growth spurt that rivaled all. She went from being the normal 2'2" or so to 7'8" in about a week. Needless to say, Sam's been quite the handful ever since.
Role Play Sample: Sam trundled around her living room floor, looking for something good to eat. Spotting a bag of cookies in the cupboard, Sam squealed in delight and quickly made her way to the delicious treat.
So - same character, same idea, just more acceptable. Please keep in mind that if you're making a character that's, say, 5 years old as compared to someone who's 30 that there will be personality and action differences. I highly doubt you'll see a 30-year old Sam squealing in delight and running for a bag of cookies unless she has a mental handicap.
Also - I kept this form fairly short - I expect something a tad bit longer. I can understand if you have a semi-normal toddler who's just there for the purpose of having a trouble-causing character.
Keep in mind - we're more inclined to accept horribly disfigured mutants than sexed up mutants. This is NOT x-men guys, I don't want to see people trying to mix animal genes with humans and getting super sexy furries or hot anime women with animal ears and tails. You have been warned.